[Heckling was practically a part of the show back home and always to be expected to test a young new bard's mettle against a pack of their loud kin and tribemates. Ren barely thinks of it as rude.]

I mean, gotta have more grapplin' in it. [That's an obvious.] And I appreciate the amount of dicks but ain't any real love stories in there. Gotta have some emotional element. Not everythin' can be sweaty ballslappin' fuckin' [A good portion of it could be. But emotions and someone to fight for were important.]