[ Boy, she could definitely get him down on his knees and praying, that's how easy he is. Plus, she is gorgeous, and as alluring as he'd expect, from what little he knows of Aphrodite.
Yet he finds like it's a lot more exciting to get to know her like this, rather than in all the texts and books he's never actually read. Suddenly he's very glad that there's only so much he "knows" about her, it's much more interesting to learn about one another in person.
He leans in at that kiss despite himself, lips pressing back to hers, however brief the contact is. He would complain for its shortness, but it really is very sweet. And her remark at the end draws a delighted laugh from him. ]
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Yet he finds like it's a lot more exciting to get to know her like this, rather than in all the texts and books he's never actually read. Suddenly he's very glad that there's only so much he "knows" about her, it's much more interesting to learn about one another in person.
He leans in at that kiss despite himself, lips pressing back to hers, however brief the contact is. He would complain for its shortness, but it really is very sweet. And her remark at the end draws a delighted laugh from him. ]
Yes, I'd say that's a definite improvement.